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 A deep desire
 psiloerwtiko ala ok:)vasika itan dio arxika alla t enosa...:P
 
only one thing i wanted here i wanted you to be near...
i wanted a kiss a hug something warm but in the end i got none....they keep telling me my life will bloom but why i can only feel is gloom???
the reality doesnt seem to me so kind....i dont like anything but i dont mind...the sky seems so clear i wish you would appear...
somewhere where reality isnt in bind where you can always be mine...am i selfish??? maybe who knows but your voice in my ears echoes...
i maybe a mad man i may just have gone paranoid but i dont know why i feel this void...please help me show me that u care..to ask u so i wouldnt dare...
i look outside the window a desperate hope to see something..even i dont know...
i try t o accommplish things...but i constantly fail... maybe im not destined for this...
maybe im just a loser...but i wish i had a person to care about...someone that can understand my feelings,,someone that can feel the same...it seems like a joke..
but i hope ill be the one to laugh....



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Nasville
09-10-2009 @ 04:16
::love.:: ::love.::
Grimmjow
09-10-2009 @ 04:17
::up.::
Mικρουλι
09-10-2009 @ 04:20
"maybe im just a loser...but i wish i had a person to care about...someone that can understand my feelings,,someone that can feel the same...it seems like a joke..
but i hope ill be the one to laugh...."

We all feel this at some point in our lives!!
Very real unfortunately, but you are not a loser, even though you feel that sometimes... look to the future in hope, be patient and some day you will see the light at the end of the tunnel!!
It is something worth waiting for!

I really enjoyed your poem as it is the hard truth many times, just I would prefer you wrote "you" instead of "u" ...

Otherwise well done!! Υπέροχο!!!


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Grimmjow
09-10-2009 @ 04:38
::up.:: eyxaristo mikrouli

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