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 Gone
 
Eternity has struck him
With her fearless, fatal blade
Vanished years, months, weeks...

His anticipation was sadly satisfied
His yearnings, drastically fulfilled
Vanished hours, minutes, moments...


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06-01-2009 @ 04:53
k13739,

... interesting notion ::smile.::

All my life i noticed how the male sex, finds it "so easy" to
express what (THEY think is), the mind and temperament of the female ... !!!

I beleive that only an arrogant (and totally unaware of respectful humility) sex, such as the male sex, is able of such
"action" ...

You seem to be expressing the "male sex", though female yourself (?) and, not quite sure I feel arrogance in your words ...

(... I think I feel "pain" actually, more than anything else ... and
some sort of "wishful thinking" ... )

Ό,τι καλύτερο εύχομαι

::smile.::
k13739
06-01-2009 @ 05:05
Aithera,
Not quite sure I understand what you are saying. Are you basing your opinion on this particular poem or all three I have posted? And no need for the question mark. I am female.
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06-01-2009 @ 05:20
k13739,

this particular poem of yours, "took" me to something that
i have noticed through mylife ...

... it is not a revolutionary notion that, this is a "man's world"
we are living in ...

and by the way, i was not questioning your physical attributions ... ::smile.::

... more, wondering on your expression's gender(ism), I guess ...
k13739
06-01-2009 @ 05:21
Hmm.. I guess it is a very bad poem then, I guess I didn't say what I wanted.... but then if it made someone feels something, anything... then it is ok.
It has nothing to do with a man's world. It is about the sudden loss of a young man with many unfulfilled dreams.
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06-01-2009 @ 05:48
k13739, ::smile.::

i should apologize for the "adultness" of my expression ...

please understand that, what I receive from a creation of another,
is basically the result of "what lives inside me" ! ...

it is never a critique of "bad" or/and "good" ...

It felt to me that, the above were the words of a "man", yet
a "woman" put those words in the mouth of a man ...

i find this "notion", very interesting ...

also, i did mention that i felt "pain" and "wishful thinking"
(you mentioned "loss" and "unfulfilled dreams")

::smile.::
k13739
06-01-2009 @ 05:40
Yes I understand what you are saying, no offence was taken, honestly. And it is true, when something touches us it is because it is familiar to us or as you said wishful thinking. Thank you for all the time you have spent on this. It is greatly appreciated, honestly. ::hug.::

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